On today's agenda

Saturday, May 14, 2005


I'll be back with the results, later.

This is later. Sunday, to be specific. I managed five pages. But they were a hard five pages. And I was just complaining to a writing buddy that maybe I'd go back to working on Odil, when I realized why I'd been so bored out of my skull with this scene. It's the wrong POV. Ruby has nothing at stake really, in this scene. She has no goal. She's only intrigued by the gorgeous man who seems to be following her around the museum. But Ben has an agenda, and I need to find a place to switch pov's and let him run with it, rather than keep trying to balance the sense of attraction versus caution in Ruby.
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Steph T. said...

Me too. Right after I bloghop. *g*

Good luck!

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